The Gift
John is a smart, kind and patient person. He lives in a simple family. His family is not rich, but enough for surviving in this world. Since he was a child he loves to read books about Christmas in the library. Since he was a child all he ever wanted is a drone, but he knew that his parents couldn't afford to buy it. John believes that Santa Claus exists. Since he was a child he always writes letter to Santa Claus asking for a drone. Every year he waited patiently, but the drone never came. He never feels upset and he still live a normal life. He goes to school every weekdays and goes to Church every Sundays.
One day, he dreamt about Christmas while he was sleeping. He asked Santa Claus for a drone in that dream. Each day he has the same dream. He starts to believe that Santa Claus will give him the drone he wanted. His parents told him that Santa Claus does not exist. He never listens to his parents. Days after days he waited until the day before Christmas.Then he wrote a letter to Santa Claus.
"Today is Christmas!" John shouted. His parents feel happy. His parents said sorry because they can't afford to give him a drone. John still feels happy and believes that Santa Claus will give him a drone. He waited all day but Santa Claus never came.
Since that day he starts to not believe any more about Santa Claus or Christmas. Days after days went by. Suddenly he found a message on his wall. The message said that why did John stop believing in Santa Claus. After that day he starts to believe again. He wrote a letter to Santa Claus asking for a drone. Then the next day he found a paper on his table that told him that said "Yes John, I will give you drone.". One day his father's business is really going up. His dad became rich.

I think your composition is already good, but I found some grammatical errors and you use the same words again and again. I suggest you to replace the same words so it would not be boring ^^
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