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Senin, 07 Maret 2016
Indomie Is Life
Indomie is a instant noodle brand by Indofood. Income is the largest instant noodle manufacturer in Indonesia. It is distributed in Australia, Asia, Africa, New Zealand, the United States, Canada, European and Middle East Countries. Indomie is also produced in Nigeria since 1995 it is also the largest instant noodle manufacturing plant in Africa. Instant noodles were first introduced into the Indonesian market in 1969. Indofood is one of Indonesia's largest pre-packaged food companies, and was founded in 1982 by Sudono Salim. The brand was first launched in 1982 with two flavours, the Indomie Kuah Rasa Kaldu Ayam (Chicken Stock) flavour and the Income Kuah Rasa Kari Ayam (Chicken Curry) flavour. In 1983, Indomie launched its first dry (served without soup) Indomie Mi Goreng variant. It quickly become popular in Indonesian market. Indomie has won several awards such as Indonesia Best Brand Award (IBBA), The Most Effective Ad, Indonesia Consumer Satisfaction Award (ICSA), and Indonesia Best Packaging Award.
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I like this post because it is very advertising and you made a lot of descriptive sentences. The tenses that you used here are good enough. In the other side, some sentences are still not arranged well. Although, the title is a bit confusing with the point of the post you created because it doesn't make sense. Overall, you did a great job!
BalasHapusThe topic you chose had watched my eye! As an Indomie lover as well, I find this topic interesting. I appreciate that you include the history of Indomie. Unfortunately, I think you focused too much on the history and there is a lack of information about the Income nowadays. I think you should include the reason why you chose the Indomie as you topic to show your love for Indomie. There is a phrase in the beginning of the story that doesn't make any sense. ""Income is the largest instant noodle manufacturer in Indonesia." confuses me. Another thing is you should write about the unique flavours that Income have these days or you could include a picture of the 'actual food' instead of the logo. Nonetheless, it is quite a good post!
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This is so far my favorite post, but not the best. It is very advertising and you used good grammars.job well done:)
BalasHapusThis is so far my favorite post, but not the best. It is very advertising and you used good grammars.job well done:)
BalasHapusThe topic of your writing really catches people eye! I think this thing is more of advertisement than a composition, but anyway good job at advertising Indomie! For the descriptive I think you focus far to much to the history of Indomie. Sure it's good for people to know the history, but now the writing lack information of the Indomie in the actual day. Other than that good job!
BalasHapusThe topic of your writing really catches people eye! I think this thing is more of advertisement than a composition, but anyway good job at advertising Indomie! For the descriptive I think you focus far to much to the history of Indomie. Sure it's good for people to know the history, but now the writing lack information of the Indomie in the actual day. Other than that good job!
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