Minggu, 20 Maret 2016

The Little Red Riding Hood

          Little Red Riding Hood was picking apples from the forest for her grandmother. She put all her apples in a basket. Her basket was full of apples. She only picked the red and juicy apples, that was why her apples tasted good. Her grandmother really liked apples that she picked, Little Red Riding Hood knew her grandmother really loved it. That was why she picked apples again.
          On her way to her way to her grandmother's house, she saw a big wolf. The big wolf ask Little Red Riding Hood where she was going. Little Red Riding Hood told the wolf that she was going to her grandmother's house. Then, the wolf ran away. Little Red Riding Hood continued walking. Little Red Riding Hood didn't know that the wolf is actually running to her grandmother's house. When the wolf reached her grandmother's house, he locked Little Red Riding Hood's grandmother in the closet and taped her mouth. He wore Little Red Riding Hood's grandmother's clothes and laid on the bed.
          Then she reached her grandmother's house. She went into her grandmother's room , she was shocked when she saw her grandmother is so big. She then asked her why her eyes are so big. Grandmother (the wolf) answered to see you clearer. She also asked why she has big ears. Grandmother (the wolf) answered to hear her clearer. She asked why she has big teeth. the wolf answered to eat you easier. Little Red Riding Hood immediately screamed for help. Luckily, there was a good man who was willing to help Red Riding Hood. The good man punched the big wolf and the big wolf run away and never came back. The good man opened the closet. Her grandmother immediately hugged her. They lived happily and peacefully.
          A few days later, Red Riding Hood was picking apples  and then a man wanted to taste her apples. He really liked it and suggested her to sell that she would sell those apples and her grandmother agreed. So she sell those apples and finally she was able to build a shop and there are more people buying her apples so she become rich and bought a big house. Little Red Riding Hood lived in that big house with her grandmother. They lived even happier and more peacefully.

4 komentar:

  1. you make some grammar mistakes. and im a but confused with your story. i have texted you about some of your mistakes. you make a hilarious mistake! hahaha=D

    BalasHapus
  2. You are a smart person i think because the way you change this story to your own version is well done. The negative things are you make some grammar mistakes and the story is not well explain. You should be more aware. Thanks:)

    BalasHapus
  3. I think you made some grammar mistakes, and some sentences are confusing and not understandable. But overall, I think you did good :)

    BalasHapus