I decided to go to New York City because I want to go to America since a very long time. New York is a busy city. There are a lot people there so I won't feel lonely. New York has more than 18000 restaurants and that is another reason why I want to go to New York. I want to try food in New York because I love to eat. Besides that is because New York is a fashionable, exciting and entertaining city. I like to see entertainment, because it makes me happy. I also want to go to the Chinatown because I love Chinese food. There are also a lot of pop concerts in New York and I really like pop cultures. These are the reasons why I decided to go to New York.
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BalasHapusBesides that, NY is so fashionable (omit 'is')
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