Singapore Trip 7A
Last Saturday(20/2/2016),my friends form 7A except for Valencia because she was sick and I along with Ma'am Melina, Ma'am Liani and Ma'am Hartati went to Singapore.So here is how the trip goes.
Day 1 (20 February 2016, Saturday)
ayI woke up at 5 a.m. and took a bath and get ready. Then I ate my breakfast. Then me and my family prayed and my dad and I went to the airport. Then my dad went home and my friends and teachers and I checked in. While others went to the boarding room, me and my other friends bought coffee at Starbucks that is available at the airport. Then we went to the boarding room and we took the flight ad arrived at Singapore. Then we walked around the airport while waiting for the bus. After about an hour, we went to the hostel by bus. After putting our things in the hostel, we went to Science Centre. But before we went there, we ate at McDonalds first. Then we went to the Science Centre and walked around there until 6 p.m.. Then we went to a mall called Cube which is not far from there. I ate lunch at Nando's. Then I payed for a sofa massage for 8 minutes and then we
walked around there for a longer time then we went home and sleep.
Day 2 (21 February 2016, Sunday)
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| Here's the view from the aeroplane when we're about to land at Singapore |
We woke at 6 a.m., took bath and get ready. Then we had breakfast downstairs at the cafeteria. Then we went to Church that is in a hotel. In the hotel, we were given food and drink. After going to Church, we went to Universal Studios Singapore. I only ride a little rides because I don't like those kind of stuff and I only ride the lame rides only. Then we went to Vivo City to eat lunch. I bought food and took it home as because the time given at Vivo City is very short. Then we went home and sleep.
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| Universal Studios Singapore |
We woke up at 5 a.m. because from Monday to Thursday, we must go to school in Singapore. The school is called Anderson Secondary School. It is a quite well-known school in Singapore. After school we went back to our hostel. After that, we were supposed to go to Orchard but due to the conditions, teachers decided that we were just going to go to Chinatown. After going to the Chinatown, we went to Ang Mo Kio Hub, a mall near our hostel. We had dinner there. Then we went back to our hostel and sleep.
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| Anderson Secondary School |
We woke up at 5 a.m., took a bath and get ready. Then we went downstairs to eat our breakfast. Then we went to school. After school we went back to our hostel and change clothes and get ready. then we took the met and bus to go to Marina Barrage. Then we went to Marina By The Bay. then we went to Ang mo Kio Hub to have dinner. Then we went back to ur hostel and sleep.
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| Marina By The Bay at day time |
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| Marina By The Bay at night time It definitely looks better at night |
We woke up at 5 a.m. again, as usual, took a bath and get ready. Then we ate breakfast downstairs and went to school. After school we went back to the hostel and change clothes. Then we went to Bugis by MRT. While we were in Bugis, we went to Bugis Junction and Bugis+. Then we went back to our hostel and sleep.
Day 6 (25 February 2016, Thursday)
We woke up at 5 a.m. and again we took a bath and get ready then we ate breakfast downstairs in the cafeteria. Then we went to school. After school we went back to our hostel and change clothes. Then we went to Orchard. Today, we were allowed to stay at Orchard longer than the duration we usually play at a certain place.
Day 7 (26 February 2016, Friday)
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| Orchard Road |
Today is probably the saddest day of the trip because we are returning to Bandung today. We woke uo not as early as we usully woke up. We woke up at 7 a.m., took a bath and get ready. Then we cleaned our rooms. By the way I am one room with Darren. Then we went downstairs to eat breakfast then we took our luggage and put it in the bus. Then we went to the airport. Then we took the flight and arrived at Bandung around 12 o'clock. Then we went home.
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BalasHapusI really appreciate that you are willing to share your experience on your Singapore trip to us. I think you include enough details for me to imagine what were you doing there. You did a great job in describing the activities you did there. It is a misfortune that you did not do well in your grammar and spelling. There are several errors that I could spot in your writing. The pictures you include in the post really makes your post more interesting. So, i think if you pat more attention on your grammar and spelling, it would be excellent!
BalasHapusAlthough this post is interesting as you include pictures and also enough detail to be able to picture your trip to Singapore, I think you should pay attention to your grammar, spelling and tenses. I spotted several mistakes in this composition.
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BalasHapusThis post is interesting but it contains a lot of grammatical error. It's nice that you included pictures which makes it more interesting.
BalasHapusthis post is great. you have posted many pictures. the details are okay but i think maybe if you add some more detail, this post will be much more interesting
BalasHapusThe post is good. You add a lot of picture to make it more interesting and detailed and the fact that you almost write everything you do is not really that useful or needed. There are quite some error in grammar, spelling, and also tenses. But surely you can improve yourself. Overall this is a good post.
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